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John Delarosa

10-24-11

Period 4a-b

Slums

The population of slums is growing.  A slum is a poor village and has many bad things.  Slums have a negative effect on human populations because they have bad water, many diseases, and poor living conditions. 

Slums have a negative effect on human populations because they have bad water.  “Muddy swamp of plastic bags obstructs the entrance to the latrine.”  It is a collection of what is known in slum vernacular as flying toilets flimsy bags filled with human waste.  For example, slums have urine in their water.  This is why people get sick because of the water. 

Slums have negative effects on human populations because they have many diseases.  For example, United Nations, slum children in sub-Saharan Africa are more likely to die from water –borne and respiratory illnesses.  Than rural children while women living in slums are more likely to contract HIV than their country cousins.  The major diseases in slums are malnutrition, diarrhea, pneumonia, and neonatal diseases.  For example, the diseases could be in food and water.

  Slums have a negative effect on human populations because they have poor living conditions.  For example, there are public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the alleyways.  Moreover, they do not wash their hands and cover their mouth

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when they cough or sneeze.  Other poor conditions are lack of water and cleanness.  A crowed population is other poor living conditions.

 In conclusion, slums have a negative effect on human populations because they have bad water, many diseases, and poor living conditions.  As you could see slums dangerous to the human populations and to animals.  Moreover, slums like to live in poor living conditions.

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Work cities

Cities of poor I: life in the slums (kenya). By sheri ,fink. December 18, 2006. Public radio international the world. http://www.the world.org/node/6669.sept 29,2011.

Miumbai’s slum life poses world problem.nils, blythe. http://news.bbc.co.uk/2lhilbussines172633.slum.feburary 23,2008.setp 29,2011

Two billion slum bwellers. Eaves, elisabeth. November 6,2006. http://www.forbes.com/2007/06/third-wored-slums-czee0611slums.html. sept 29,2011.

Urban ization. Abc-clio. 2011. “world georaphy-understanding a changing world” http:worldgeography.bc.clid.com/search/display11095691? Termslums. Sept 29,2011.

rough draft

John Delarosa

10-24-11

Period 4a-b

Slums

The population of slums is growing.  A slum is a poor village and has many bad things.  Slums have a native effect on human populations because they have bad water, many diseases, and poor living conditions.  Slums have a native effect on human populations because they have bad water.  “Muddy swamp of plastic bags obstructs the entrance to the latrine.”  It is a collection of what is known in slum vernacular as flying toilets flimsy bags filled with human waste.  For example, slums have urine in their water. This is why people get sick because of the water.  Slums have native effects on human populations because they have many diseases.  For example, United Nations, slum children in sub-Saharan Africa are more likely to die from water –borne and respiratory illnesses.  Than rural children while women living in slums are more likely to contract HIV than their country cousins.  The major diseases in slums are malnutrition, diarrhea, pneumonia, and neonatal diseases.  For example, the diseases could be in food and water.  Slums have a native effect on human populations because they have poor living conditions.  For example, there are public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the alleyways.  Moreover, they do not wash their hands and cover their mouth when they cough or sneeze.  Other poor conditions are lack of water and cleanness.  A crowed population is other poor living conditions.  In conclusion, slums have a native effect on human populations because they have bad water, many diseases, and poor living conditions. As you could see, slums are dangerous to the human populations and to animals.  Moreover, slums like to live in poor living conditions.

intro

  the population of slums is growing. a slum is a poor village and have a lot of bad things. slums have a native effect on human populations because they have bad water, many diseases, and poor living conditions.

outline

I. Intro

a.       Hook- the population of slums is growing.
b. a slum is a poor village and have a lot of bad things. 

c.     Thesis Statement-slums have a native effect on human populations because they have bad water, many diseases, and poor living conditions.

II. First paragraph

a.       Slums have a native effect on human populations because they have bad water.

b.      “Muddy swamp of plastic bags obstructs the entrance to the latrine.”

c.       It is a collection of what is known in slum vernacular as flying toilets flimsy bags filled with human waste.

d.      For example, slums have urine in their water.

e.       This is why people get sick because of the water.

III. Second paragraph

a.       Slums have native effects on human populations because they have many diseases.

b.      For example, United Nations, slum children in sub-Saharan Africa are more likely to die from water –borne and respiratory illnesses.

c.       Than rural children while women living in slums are more likely to contract HIV than their country cousins.

d.       The major diseases in slums are malnutrition, diarrhea, pneumonia, and neonatal diseases.

e.       For example, the diseases could be in food and water.

IV. Third paragraph  

a.       Slums have a native effect on human populations because they have poor living conditions.

b.      For example, there are public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the alleyways.

c.       Moreover, they do not wash their hands and cover their mouth when they cough or sneeze.

d.      Other poor conditions are lack of water and cleanness.

e.       A crowed population is another poor living conditions.

V. Conclusion

a.       In conclusion, slums have a native effect on human populations because they have bad water, many diseases, and poor living conditions.

b.      As you could see, slums are dangerous to the human populations and to animals.

c.       Moreover, slums like to live in poor living conditions.

thesis stament

slums have an native effects on human populations because they have bad water, many diseases, and poor living conditions.